Pomoc z angielskiego, poprawa tekstu

[mgit]

A więc, mam pewien tekst, który muszę oddać do oceny, z racji iż nie jestem jego pewny... Przydało by się go sprawdzić i popoprawiać błędy, a na pewno takowe są.

Reputka czeka

Hi. My name is Mateusz. I don***8217;t sibling***8217;s. I twenty years old. I com from Poland. I British to ten of the September. I***8217;ve the blue eyes, and I to wear the glasses. At present I to go a school and of work. The work I to commute a car or the bus. My favorite film star is from USA. His name is Angelina Juliet. I like to play computer games (WarCraft, Anno 1701). Also I like to listen to the music pop and rap. My mother***8217;s name is Halina. She don***8217;t work, she to look after sb the home. The dad he working of the home. My an mother in free time is reed***8217;s a books. She to wear a glasses to reed books, she has the green eyes. She has the long hairs. She to like to drive car at shopping, the allotment after simply everywhere. I***8217;ve grandmother in the country, near the city. The grandmother is mother my a dad. She is old, and she is very stick. She don***8217;t walk to the city. All the time to help my parents. They to clean her the house, to make shopping, to bring the hard coal and to light the stove. Grandmother is very love. She always to wait at the all. Her favorite occupation is to listen to the radio ***8220;Maryja***8221;. She to adore reed the religious books, and to pray.

[kizio]

hmm og***243;lnie to ma***322;o rozumiem z tego. Albo m***243;j angielski jest za s***322;aby na taki pro tekst albo mo***380;e napisz te***380; o polsku o co chodzi***322;o. B***322;***281;dy s***261;. Nawet nie ma***322;o.

Hi. My name is Mateusz. I don***8217;t sibling***8217;s. I'm twenty years old and I come from Poland. I British to ten of the September. I***8217;ve blue eyes, and I to wear the glasses. At present I to go a school and of work. The work I to commute a car or the bus. My favorite film star is from USA. Her name is Angelina Juliet. I like to play computer games (WarCraft, Anno 1701). Also I like to listen to the music pop and rap. My mother***8217;s name is Halina. She doesn***8217;t work, she to look after sb the home. My father works at home. My mother in free time is reading books. She has to wear the glasses to read the book. She has long hairs. She to like to drive car at shopping, the allotment after simply everywhere. I***8217;ve grandmother in the country, near the city. The grandmother is my father's mom. She is old, and she is very stick. She don***8217;t walk to the city. All the time to help my parents. They to clean her the house, to make shopping, to bring the hard coal and to light the stove. Grandmother is very love. She always to wait at the all. Her favorite occupation is to listen to the radio ***8220;Maryja***8221;. She to adore reed the religious books, and to pray.

To co wyda***322;o mi si***281; bez sensu z leksza poprawi***322;em. To co podkre***347;lone powinno byc imo zmienione.

[Agusia]

I British to ten of the September

Co chcia***322;es napisa***263; w tym zdaniu, bo nijak nie mog***281; wymy***347;li***263; ?

A tak w og***243;le to nie chc***281; Ci sprawi***263; przykro***347;ci, ale tam s***261; same bl***281;dy.

His name is Angelina Juliet

Chyba: her name is Angelina Jolie.

[mgit]

Wersja polska:

Cze***347;***263;. Nazywam si***281; Mateusz. Pochodz***281; z polski. Nie mam rodze***324;stwa. Urodzi***322;em si***281; 10 wrze***347;nia. Mam niebieskie oczy, i nosz***281; okulary. Aktualnie chodz***281; do szko***322;y i pracuj***281;. Do pracy doje***380;d***380;am swoim samochodem lub busem. Moj***261; ulubion***261; gwiazda filmowa pochodzi z USA. Nazywa si***281; ona Angelina Joliet. Lubi***281; gra***263; w gry komputerowe (WarCraft, Anno 1701). Tak***380;e lubi***281; s***322;ucha***263; muzyki pop i rap. Moja mama ma na imi***281; Halina. Ona nie chodzi do pracy, zajmuje si***281; domem. Tato pracuje na dom. Moja mama w wolnym czasie czyta ksi***261;***380;ki. Ona r***243;wnie***380; nosi okulary ale do czytania ksi***261;***380;ek, ma niebieskie oczy. Ona ma d***322;ugie w***322;osy, i lubi je***378;dzi***263; samochodem na zakupy, na dzia***322;k***281;, poprostu wsz***281;dzie. Moja babcia mieszka na wsi blisko miasta. Babcia jest mam***261; taty, i jest ju***380; stara i bardzo chora. Ona nie chodzi do miasta. Ca***322;y czas pomagaj***261; jej moi rodzice, sprz***261;taj***261; dom, robi***261; zakupy, przynosz***261; w***281;giel i rozpalaj***261; w piecu. Babcia jest bardzo kochana. Ona zawsze czeka na wszystkich. Ona uwielbia s***322;uchac radia maryja, czyta***263; religijne ksi***261;***380;ki i si***281; modli***263;.

Wiem...

Odno***347;nie tego:

I British to ten of the September

Chodzi***322;o mi o co***347; takiego:

Urodzi***322;em si***281; 10 wrze***347;nia

[kizio]

powiedz mi: u***380;ywa***322;e***347; jakiego***347; translatora? Bo tak mi to wygl***261;da. Tekst kt***243;ry da***322;e***347; po angielsku nie oznacza tego samego co chcia***322;e***347; powiedzie***263;. Gdyby nie taka pora to postara***322;bym si***281; to napisa***263; ale teraz ju***380; nie mam si***322;.

[joujoujou]

Bardzo du***380;o byk***243;w w takim prostym tek***347;cie.

To mnie ubawi***322;o do ***322;ez -->

His name is Angelina Juliet.

Jego imi***281; to...

Hi. My name is Mateusz. I don***8217;t sibling***8217;s.[What the fuck is that? } I'm twenty years old. I am from Poland. I British to ten of the September. I***8217;ve blue eyes, and I wear the glasses. Actually I'm going to school and working as well. The work I to commute a car or the bus. My favorite movie star is American actress, Angelina Jolie. I like playing computer games (WarCraft, Anno 1701). Also I like listening to the music, especially pop and rap. My mother***8217;s name is Halina. She's not working, she's looking after our home. The dad he working of the home. [OCB?] Dalej mi si***281; ju***380; nie chce.

[Mich@ł]

Troch***281; na szybko podreperowa***322;em.. Du***380;ym tekstem s***261; partie, kt***243;rych nie rozumiem..

Hi. My name is Mateusz I DON'T HAVE ANY SIBLINGS. I am twenty years old. I come from Poland. TUTAJ NIE MAM POJ***280;CIA. I have got blue eyes. I wear glasses. I am a student, but I am working to earn money too. NIE WIEM. My favourite film star is from USA. Her name is Angelina J. I like playing computer games (Warcraft, Anno 1701). I like listening to the music (pop and rap). My mother's name is Halina. She doesn't work. She LOOKS AFTER THE HOUSE. NIE ROZUMIEM. Me and my mother spend our free time reading books. She has got green eyes. She need glasses to read. She has long hairs. NIE ROZUMIEM. I have grandmother GDZIE? She's the mother of my father. She's old and very JAKA? DO KO***323;CA JU***379; NIE ROZUMIEM.

[mgit]

Napisany przez kizio

powiedz mi: u***380;ywa***322;e***347; jakiego***347; translatora? Bo tak mi to wygl***261;da. Tekst kt***243;ry da***322;e***347; po angielsku nie oznacza tego samego co chcia***322;e***347; powiedzie***263;. Gdyby nie taka pora to postara***322;bym si***281; to napisa***263; ale teraz ju***380; nie mam si***322;.

Nie u***380;ywa***322;em translatora, szczerze powiedziawszy to nawet nie mam ***380;adnego ...

Pisa***322;em to z pami***281;ci, mo***380;na powiedzie***263;, ***380;e na szybkiego...

To koniecznie na dzi***347; nie musi by***263;...

Termin ostateczny na oddanie tego mam do 20

Wi***281;c jak by by***322;o na jutro (np. na wiecz***243;r) to by***322;bym bardzo wdzi***281;czny

Napisany przez Mich@***322;

Troch***281; na szybko podreperowa***322;em.. Du***380;ym tekstem s***261; partie, kt***243;rych nie rozumiem..

Hi. My name is Mateusz I DON'T HAVE ANY SIBLINGS. I am twenty years old. I come from Poland. TUTAJ NIE MAM POJ***280;CIA. I have got blue eyes. I wear glasses. I am a student, but I am working to earn money too. NIE WIEM. My favourite film star is from USA. Her name is Angelina J. I like playing computer games (Warcraft, Anno 1701). I like listening to the music (pop and rap). My mother's name is Halina. She doesn't work. She LOOKS AFTER THE HOUSE. NIE ROZUMIEM. Me and my mother spend our free time reading books. She has got green eyes. She need glasses to read. She has long hairs. NIE ROZUMIEM. I have grandmother GDZIE? She's the mother of my father. She's old and very JAKA? DO KO***323;CA JU***379; NIE ROZUMIEM.

A wi***281;c tak

I British to ten of the September.

Powinno by***263;: Urodzi***322;em si***281; 10 wrze***347;nia ale nie wiem jak to poprawnie zapisac po angielsku...

Co do

His name is Angelina Juliet.

to fakt wiadomo ***380;e ma by***263; Her..... b***322;***261;d literowy

Normlanie si***281; pod***322;ama***322;em wsio z anglika zapomnia***322;em

Mam nadzieje, ***380;e komu***347; si***281; uda w tym ogromie b***322;***281;d***243;w si***281; jako***347; doczyta***263; (wraz z polsk***261; wersj***261;) i jako***347; poprawi***263;.... ca***322;o***347;***263;

[Agusia]

A czy to ma tak być jak po polsku, bo ten tekst też jest niezbyt spójny ?

Odnośnie tego:

Cytat:
I British to ten of the September
Chodziło mi o coś takiego:

Cytat:
Urodziłem się 10 września

I was born September, the tenth ( chyba )

[mgit]

O ....

A ja my***347;***322;aem zawsze ***380;e born to jest rodzi***263; si***281;

O widze ***380;e tu reputki polec***261;... a jednak dopiero jutro bo to ograniczenie

[joujoujou]

I was born 10th of september - wystarczy.

[pablocoo]

Hi. My name is Mateusz. I'm form Poland. I was born on September 10th, 1987, so I'm 20 years old. I don't have any sibling. I have blue eyes and I wear glasses. At the moment I'm going to school and working as well. I travel to work by my own car or sometimes by a bus.My favorite movie star is American actress, Angelina Jolie. I like playing computer games, like WarCraft, Anno 1701. I also like listening to the music, especially pop and rap. My mother***8217;s name is Halina. She doesn't work, she looks after home. She has long, beautiful hairs. She likes to read books in/at her free time. She also wears glasses, but only for reading. She loves to drive a car: to shop, to allotment, just anywhere. My father provides for the house. My grandmother lives in a country, but not too far from the city. She's my dad's mother. She's old and very sick. She can't go to the city. My parents help her all the time. They clean her house, do shopping, bring coal to house and light a stove. Grandma is just lovely. She always waits for us all. Her passion is listening to "Radio Maryja", reading religious books and praying.

Poprawcie b***322;***281;dy.
Kursyw***261; cz***281;***347;ci, kt***243;rych nie jestem pewien.

[joujoujou]

Hair nie ma liczby mnogiej.

[IceManSpy]

A to jest moja wersja:

Hi. My name is Metausz. I***8217;m from Poland. I don***8217;t have siblings. I was born 10th of september. I have blue eyes and I wear glasses. At now, I go to school and I work. To work I get by my car or bus. My favourite star (celebrity) is from USA. Her nam eis Angelina Jolie. I like playing computer games for example WarCraft or Anno 1701. Also, I like listening pop and rap music.
My mother nam eis Halina. She doesn***8217;t go to work, she works in home. (nie wiem jak jest zajmowa***263; si***281; domem).(tutaj usun***261;***322;em tat***281; ***61514; ). In free time, my mother reads books. She Has blue eyes and wears Glassem, but only to reading book. She Has long hair and she like going to shop, to land parcel, everywhere by car. My grand-mother lives on country near city. Grand-mother is mother***8217;s dad and she is old and ill. She doesn***8217;t go to city. All time, my parents help her. They clean house, do shop (nie jestem pewien), bring coal and catch fire in fireplace (kominek mo***380;e by***263;? ). She is lovely. She waiting for everyone. She like listening maryja***8217;s radio, reading religious books, and praying.


Troch***281; zmienione, ale sens ten sam. Jak gdzie***347; jest b***322;***261;d literowy to wybaczcie, word sam poprawia***322;.