potrzebna korekcja błędów

[kizio]

Chciałbym żebyście przeczytali i sprawdzili co jest napisane błędnie i co można napisać lepiej Tekst pisałem na szybko więc błędów pewnie będzie sporo chociaż starałem się ich nie robić

McDonald is the most popular Fast Food restaurant on the World. There is not much difference in dish which you can get In Poland or in USA but in some countries the difference between dishes is large. One of those countries is India where people don***8217;t eat beef because beef is form cow and cows are sacred. Is that difference between dishes in other country a good way? Maybe better would be standardizing? My opinion in that thing? Ok, so I think that a true is in the middle. Differences are good ***8211; for example you live in USA and you eat every day a lunch in McDonald ***8211; your favorite dish is Big Mac ***8211; you eat it along week - when it going to be boring you starts eating McChicken etc. Some day you get a work offer from company in India. You went to India and you see that there is a McDonald near your work place. You are hungry so you decide to eat something in that fast food. You look in the menu and you see that there are exactly those same dishes as in USA. Of course that is not true but if that will be true ***8211; it will be very annoying. But happily McDonald has a good idea ***8211; we can create a dishes exclusively for region in which a restaurant is. For example in India you can buy a Maharaja Mac (mutton burger), in Poland a WieśMac (a Burger with more vegetables) however you can buy a Big Mac or Cheeseburger in these countries too. Don***8217;t you think that this is the best way? Remember that you can always go to other fast food like a Burger King, KFC, Wendy***8217;s or start eating a healthy food.

[SpeedFreaK]

A co b***281;de z tego mia***322;??

[kizio]

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A co będe z tego miał??

Reputę i moją wdzięczność

[Jarson]

Przy okazji (ju***380; nie b***281;d***281; robi***322; ba***322;aganu w poprzednim po***347;cie, tylko tu napisz***281;):

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A co b***281;de z tego mia***322;??

Od chwili, pojawienia si***281; s***322;owa "ZAP***321;AC***280;" w nazwie tego tematu, interesowno***347;***263; Forumowicz***243;w gwa***322;townie wzros***322;a

[SpeedFreaK]

Tak na szybko Na pewno nie jest idealnie, ale lepiej niż było

prosze

McDonald is the most popular fast food restaurant in the world. There is not much difference in dish(es) which you can get In Poland or in the USA but in some countries the difference between dishes is significant. One of them is India where people don***8217;t eat beef because cows are sacred. Is that difference between dishes in other country a good way? Maybe better would be standardizing? My opinion about that thing? Ok, so I think that a truth is in the middle. Differences are good ***8211; for example- you live in the USA and you eat lunch in McDonald every day ***8211; your favorite dish is Big Mac ***8211; you eat it along week - when it starts boring you, you begin eating McChicken etc. Some day you get a work offer from company in India. You***8217;re going to India and you see that there is a McDonald near your work place. You are hungry so you decide to eat something in that fast food. You look in the menu and you see that there are exactly the same dishes as in the USA. Of course that is not true but if that will be true ***8211; it will be very annoying. But happily McDonald has a good idea ***8211; we can create a dishes exclusively for region in which a restaurant is. For example in India you can buy a Maharaja Mac (mutton burger), in Poland a WieśMac (a Burger with more vegetables) however you can buy a Big Mac or Cheeseburger in these countries too. Don***8217;t you think that this is the best way? Remember that you can always go to other fast food like a Burger King, KFC, Wendy***8217;s or start eating a healthy food.

[kizio]

Dzi***281;ki wielkie - widz***281; ***380;e wcale tak du***380;o b***322;***281;d***243;w nie by***322;o

[SpeedFreaK]

Ale ja nie m***243;wie, ***380;e tam ju***380; nie ma b***322;***281;d***243;w. Poprawi***322;em te, co na szybko zauwa***380;y***322;em

Mo***380;e ktos jeszcze co***347; zauwa***380;y

[Jarson]

"Is that difference between dishes in other country a good way? Maybe better would be standardizing? My opinion about that thing?" - trzy pytania pod rz***261;d, niedotycz***261;ce jednego w***261;tku (najpierw dwie alternatywy - dobrze sformu***322;owane, ale potem to "pytanie" b***281;d***261;ce wst***281;pem do wyra***380;enia Twojej opinii) - nie radz***281; tego tak pisa***263;. Po prostu - "In my opinion the truth is in the middle".

"Of course that is not true but if that will be true ***8211; it will be very annoying" - tu jest napisane co***347; na rodzaj "tak nie jest, ale je***347;li jednak b***281;dzie...", a chyba lepiej pasowa***322;oby "tak nie jest, ale gdyby w***322;a***347;nie tak si***281; sprawy mia***322;y..." - nie wiem dlaczego, ale nie mog***281; jako***347; tego ***322;adnie sformu***322;owa***263;, wi***281;c tylko podpowiadam...

P.S. Zako***324;czenie mi si***281; podoba - "or start eating a healthy food"

[kizio]

Napisany przez Jarson

[...] Po prostu - "In my opinion the truth is in the middle".

Poprawi***322;em

Napisany przez Jarson

"Of course that is not true but if that will be true ***8211; it will be very annoying" - tu jest napisane co***347; na rodzaj "tak nie jest, ale je***347;li jednak b***281;dzie...", a chyba lepiej pasowa***322;oby "tak nie jest, ale gdyby w***322;a***347;nie tak si***281; sprawy mia***322;y..." - nie wiem dlaczego, ale nie mog***281; jako***347; tego ***322;adnie sformu***322;owa***263;, wi***281;c tylko podpowiadam...

Te***380; niezbyt mam pomys***322; na sformu***322;owanie tego.

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P.S. Zako***324;czenie mi si***281; podoba - "or start eating a healthy food"