Zadanie z angielskiego [cza poprawić]

[superrrmario]

Late evening me and my girlfriend Anka were coming back home from the disco. To get ther faster we decided to take a shortcut. The road led through so called Estate of Miracles, it was the poorest estate of them all. We were going fast, but when we passed one of old buildings we heard strange noises. When we came closer the noises turned out to be a terrible row. Anka wanted to hasten telling me that it's not our business. I didn't agree. Then we heard somebody calling for help. We still didn't know what was going on, maybe it was a husband abusing his wife. Eventually Anka agreed and we called a police.

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