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Stary 03.02.2008, 20:04   #1
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McDonald is the most popular Fast Food restaurant on the World. There is not much difference in dish which you can get In Poland or in USA but in some countries the difference between dishes is large. One of those countries is India where people don***8217;t eat beef because beef is form cow and cows are sacred. Is that difference between dishes in other country a good way? Maybe better would be standardizing? My opinion in that thing? Ok, so I think that a true is in the middle. Differences are good ***8211; for example you live in USA and you eat every day a lunch in McDonald ***8211; your favorite dish is Big Mac ***8211; you eat it along week - when it going to be boring you starts eating McChicken etc. Some day you get a work offer from company in India. You went to India and you see that there is a McDonald near your work place. You are hungry so you decide to eat something in that fast food. You look in the menu and you see that there are exactly those same dishes as in USA. Of course that is not true but if that will be true ***8211; it will be very annoying. But happily McDonald has a good idea ***8211; we can create a dishes exclusively for region in which a restaurant is. For example in India you can buy a Maharaja Mac (mutton burger), in Poland a WieśMac (a Burger with more vegetables) however you can buy a Big Mac or Cheeseburger in these countries too. Don***8217;t you think that this is the best way? Remember that you can always go to other fast food like a Burger King, KFC, Wendy***8217;s or start eating a healthy food.
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